—💕your very own, Peeko
Part of revising a poem is often taking out lines that seem like they don’t belong. In a recent poem I’d completed, I’d taken out a whole stanza that involved wrapping the recipient or subject of the poem in a blanket…It was a comfy idea, but really felt out of place, and once I took that stanza out, I felt I could complete the poem and I am happy with it.
I considered the lines and the idea, the things we may take out may truly have their place elsewhere. That blanket line I realized was actually a desire of my cat Peeko’s that somehow infiltrated that poem. It was meant that Peeko have a blanket to lie across and cuddle with in winter, and he has one now…:) Just an idea. Peeko’s dream come true. 😽 He is very happy and has become like a tiny kitten again.
💗—Jade
4 responses to “About the Lines You May Edit out of Your Poems”
This is great Jade. Very helpful. And Peeko could not be any cuter or more adorable! 💙
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Ty Mom 🙂 He is proud of the blanket too
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And so cute.
Saving lines is a good idea because you never know when they might come in handy–IF you can find them haha.
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Haha true! 🙂 I’ve saved them in my drafts folder on computer or in my poetry notebook at times
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